[linux-elitists] NYLXS Press Release on the OLPC Project

Rick Moen rick@linuxmafia.com
Mon Apr 28 12:06:15 PDT 2008


Quoting Modus Operandi (modus@as220.org):

> Ruben: the first three paragraphs are good.

A press release that _exceeds_ three substantive paragraphs is unclear
on the concept.  Ditto a press release that reads like a long and
unfocussed personal essay, and one that was (apparently) sent to no
press outlets whatsoever, but only to Linux technical mailing lists.

> Finally, keep it short.

Quite.  _Much_ shorter, in fact.




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