[linux-elitists] NYLXS Press Release on the OLPC Project
Mon Apr 28 12:06:15 PDT 2008
Quoting Modus Operandi (email@example.com):
> Ruben: the first three paragraphs are good.
A press release that _exceeds_ three substantive paragraphs is unclear
on the concept. Ditto a press release that reads like a long and
unfocussed personal essay, and one that was (apparently) sent to no
press outlets whatsoever, but only to Linux technical mailing lists.
> Finally, keep it short.
Quite. _Much_ shorter, in fact.
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